Defy the rule! (That might make a good slogan for a commercial!) I agree. We make our own luck. Good analysis of Odysseus' speech!

The Fate of the Humans Existance

In lines 149-161 of the Odyssey Odysseus shares his thoughts on the Human existance. He believes the human race is doomed to a destiny of constant change and tribulations. He also believes that humans state of mind is feeble and when faced with trials that are miniscule in the grand scheme of time we falter. Our problem is that we react to life and wait for it to happen to us instead of us making life happen and things reacting to us. Thats how all successful people are they make things happen and roll with the punches. I agree with Odysseus' statement but I think there are people out there that defy this rule and because they are above everyone else then they are viewed as great.

Immortal/Dead

I like your style, Devan, and the creative way you addressed the underworld. You define the key problems with the concept of immortality.

Kingdom of the Dead

O kingdom of the dead, the bed of eternal slumber . The resting place of all ones who have been cast down by the harsh hand of life. The inevitable end for all mortals that roam the surface of our planet Earth. I sing a tale of your endless depths of fire pain and despair. The blackness darker than any in the mortal realm. A darnkess blacker than the void. The power of evil and lost souls fills the air. I stair into you no color in my face and wonder ...how will I stay sane in the the endless forever to come?